Writing: Ask a question

How did you celebrate your birthday? I celebrated mine at my house with my sister and my parents. It was fun! I had ice cream and chocolate cake. It was tasty.

posted by Ryan

Writing: Use a sound

"Seeeeewrrr!" We slipped down the water slide. "Hey," someone said, "water balloon fight" as balloons whizzed through the air. "Pop, bang, pop" as they hit you. "Squash" as we ran on the grass from the water . It was a water party and we were all having fun! It was my 8th birthday.


posted by Connor H

Writing: Give a Startling Fact

I had woken up to a new day about 2,190 times! It was my birthday, my 6th birthday in fact. It was 7:09 A.M, the party was at 8:00, so I had to get going. I looked outside, the blow up toy was set up. Then, I had a bowl of cereal. Next, I brushed my teeth, made my bed, got dressed, and read. I read Civil War on Sunday. Now it was time for the party and all the people I had invited were here. We started to jump on the blow up toy. Next, we played badminton. Then, we ate cake. It was time for everybody to leave. I was really tired!

Posted by Mitchell

Writing...Describe the Setting

It was dark outside, even though it was light in the room I was sitting in. There were four sleeping bags lined up on the floor. There were scissors, paper and other things you need to do crafts scattered on the floor. Also, there were beanbag chairs, some with girls, some without. Along the walls were my sister's baby cradles and clothes. In addition there was a pretend kitchen with a box of dishes. Plus, there was my piano and chair. Also, there was a couch on which there was one sleeping bag. And there was a very big closet in which there was Miranda looking for something reason all these things were on the playroom floor and couch was because it was my birthday sleepover.

Posted by Caitlin